Example 1:

    Comments:
  1. There is a typo ("...at leas..")
  2. Formatting looks unprofessional and crude.
  3. What does "based on APA, 2000, 1994" mean?

    4. Example 2:

    Good Will Hunting

      Comments:
    1. It should be "affect his relationships," not "effect his relationships."
    2. "Theraputic" is misspelled.
    3. The last sentence suggests it is "coping strategies" that are being helped. Better would be "...how they would alleviate symptoms and teach coping strategies."
    4. There are what appear to be leftover outline headings "a," and other "remnants" showing that should be deleted.

    Example 3:

    Comments:

    Where are the commas?

    Example 4:

    1. What does that mean?

    Example 5:

    Comments:

    Disorganized and incoherent!

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